Tuesday, October 12, 2010

My Tears...!

The clouds were thick dense and almost touchable, trees bowed down to the wind almost as though kissing each others' branches n leaves, the park didn't have a single grass standing straight! With raised hands like crucified Jesus, head raised up above asking-wanting-needing to be hugged I stood and the eyeballs shook like reacting to the wind, lips shivering n dry!

Filled eyes held back from flowing down same like clouds that didn't pour down...not yet, said the master! 'Unless you are ordered' The verdict was to be honored!

They who had known had become strangers, tolerance being questioned, again they waged same wars! To react was easy but not to was the choice and hung in silence none had any conclusion. Such times should end and can't be long believed the pumping heart but how true - the master didn't revert.

Slowly the eyes gave way and as though a broken dam it had flown down. They arrived to see and clouds had departed too... The tears were washed away, master said none will see you cry! They saw the wet face and turned away...

Like the sun who made all stars look unworthy, rains made my tears drown in them while they said I didn't cry and walked away once again... I looked up, the master whispered but I'm no saint to decipher!

2 comments:

The New Mommy in the block said...

ayyooooo..... I have tears in my eyes now,well almost hehe.. So much depth in what u write! For the love of Gaaaaawd it actually makes me think..!

shrik said...

Hey thanks, but I really can't believe someone can understand my language of thoughts! If you did, I'm so damn glad :)

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